10月14澳大利亚大作文解析-带范文

程老师托雅2021-09-26 09:38:35

昨天澳大利亚考场的题目非常的有意思,澳大利亚是悉尼考试时间,如果是正常的话,比泰国的时间早三个小时,大家都知道考试3个小时,也就是是说如果有人在澳大利亚考试是可以把答案传给泰国的学生的,但是很有意思就是如今的题目不一样的,如果有兴趣的同学可以去看天才枪手,当然他们也不会给我广告费的。

 

我们说说2017/10/14澳大利亚的大作文, 因为被大中华区在随之而来的考试中使用还是很有可能的。

Therehave been many invention in human history, such as wheel. Some people think themost important thig is the internet, TO what extent do you agree or disagreewith this opinion?

 

拿到题目之后我先问问我学Computer Science 的老公工程师,问他,我本以为他会说那是必须得,这是创世纪的改变,但是他说不能这么说,比如火的发明,比如造纸术,比如飞机等。

这就是我们idea 的来源,这篇文章有个修饰词to what extent do youagree or disagree

我们可以说:I think internet is a huge breakthrough, but it is not rational toname one invention as the most important one. 本着这样的思路,我们的思路图是这样的

 

第一段

Intro+point:  important, one of the most important inventions

第二段

Why  it is important:sharing of information and technologies, global village

第三段

Why  it is important: communication, e-mails in business areas

第四段

其他也有很重要的发明,如造纸术,保存了文明,文化,civilized,飞机的发明让我们缩短了距离,商务往来和旅游,更加了解这个世界

显微镜让我们了解微观世界,治愈了黑死病

第五段

所以我认为互联网的确很重要,但是每一样发明在人类的不同发展阶段扮演了不同的角色,他们共同促进人类的繁衍生息,生生不息。都很重要。

 

 

有了这个思路再写文章,就不会抓瞎,之所以把这个文章拉出来讲讲,是因为在课上课时问题,不会涵盖所有类型的题目,课下需要多补充和思考。

需要完整作文者,可以留言索求啦。


10.16补充,今天才知道原来我的公众好是不能留言的,好简陋的公众号,后台还有微信上有好多学生要范文,首先申明范文不是标准答案,是众多可行的思路的一种体现,供大家参考。

Internethas certainly been reshaping this world since it was widely used from 1990s inthe US, and some people claim that this technology is the Most importantinvention in human’s history. I personally think it is one of the mostinfluential breakthroughs human has ever made.

 

Primarily,this technology converts our world form an isolated countries to awell-connected global village where people in various regions, of differenteducation backgrounds and religious beliefs can have the equal access to theknowledge database and information, thus facilitating the similar-pace progressin every country and offering everyone a chance to see the real world withtheir own eyes.

 

Furthermore,countries are able to have communications more conveniently than before byusing the internet to send and receive emails or mock face-to-face businessnegotiations, even for the ordinary people, SNS websites and chatting toolshelp them to keep liaisons with old friends or families far away. Internet freesus from social isolation and saves abundant cost which used to be spent on communication.

 

Evenit is so important to every one of us, we still cannot take it as the mostimportant invention, as we have numerous splendid inventions in the pasthistory of mankind. The invention of paper making helps to spread the languagesand the civilization of a nation while ensuring the poor to be also literate;the pilot fly of airplane made by Wright brothers makes the dream of flying areality and the successive improvements of the airplanes shortens the distanceacross even the vastest oceans, just name a few.

 

Tosum up, we admit internet is essential, as it bridges people but I think it isamong those most important inventions which have helped the human being’sexistence and comfortable living.