Therehave been many invention in human history, such as wheel. Some people think themost important thig is the internet, TO what extent do you agree or disagreewith this opinion?
拿到题目之后我先问问我学Computer Science 的老公工程师，问他，我本以为他会说那是必须得，这是创世纪的改变，但是他说不能这么说，比如火的发明，比如造纸术，比如飞机等。
这就是我们idea 的来源，这篇文章有个修饰词to what extent do youagree or disagree
我们可以说：I think internet is a huge breakthrough, but it is not rational toname one invention as the most important one. 本着这样的思路，我们的思路图是这样的
Intro+point： important， one of the most important inventions
Why it is important：sharing of information and technologies, global village
Why it is important: communication, e-mails in business areas
Internethas certainly been reshaping this world since it was widely used from 1990s inthe US, and some people claim that this technology is the Most importantinvention in human’s history. I personally think it is one of the mostinfluential breakthroughs human has ever made.
Primarily,this technology converts our world form an isolated countries to awell-connected global village where people in various regions, of differenteducation backgrounds and religious beliefs can have the equal access to theknowledge database and information, thus facilitating the similar-pace progressin every country and offering everyone a chance to see the real world withtheir own eyes.
Furthermore,countries are able to have communications more conveniently than before byusing the internet to send and receive emails or mock face-to-face businessnegotiations, even for the ordinary people, SNS websites and chatting toolshelp them to keep liaisons with old friends or families far away. Internet freesus from social isolation and saves abundant cost which used to be spent on communication.
Evenit is so important to every one of us, we still cannot take it as the mostimportant invention, as we have numerous splendid inventions in the pasthistory of mankind. The invention of paper making helps to spread the languagesand the civilization of a nation while ensuring the poor to be also literate;the pilot fly of airplane made by Wright brothers makes the dream of flying areality and the successive improvements of the airplanes shortens the distanceacross even the vastest oceans, just name a few.
Tosum up, we admit internet is essential, as it bridges people but I think it isamong those most important inventions which have helped the human being’sexistence and comfortable living.